Feedback from final animation.

I created a animation based on the brief of advertising Coulsdon College. I was asked to cover as many subjects as possible and make it positive. 
My animation contains animated text and hand written text and images accompanied by a selection of photographs.
I showed my target audience and they advised me on how i could improve my animation to make it more appealing. The positive feedback consisted of a good song choice which was bubbly and up lifting along with the photo's, the text was appropriate and covered college topics and resources and the choice of colour matched the college theme. 

However to get a more positive response I could add the college logo to publicise a little more and add a few more cheesy photographs. I could also make the transitions more effective and smooth and add more colour like green which also matched the theme. To top it off if i added end credits i could possibly get a higher grade.